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THOUGHTS: The user wants a short, catchy French title for a job ad. Category: cleaner Type: part-time Description breakdown: - Parents with busy schedules need help. - Regular house maintenance. - Tasks: cleaning, dusting, floors, bathroom, kitchen, laundry, simple ironing, tidying. - Respect for privacy/discretion is key. - Pay: 14.5€/hour. - Conscious work expected. - Integrate discreetly into daily life. - Written by a private individual. Constraints: - Max 8 words. - Coherent with description (tone, content). - Natural and direct, like from a private individual. - No quotes, no final punctuation. - Avoid repeating "recherchons une personne de confiance pour l'entretien régulier de notre logement" or similar. - Simple title, no adjectives. - Respond ONLY with the title. Let's brainstorm some ideas, keeping the constraints in mind. Keywords/concepts: - Ménage / cleaner - Entretien / maintenance - Aide / help - Domicile / home - Partiel / part-time - Discret / discreet - Fiable / reliable (even if "confiance" is in description, the title should avoid direct repetition) - Particulier / private (from a private individual) Initial ideas (and self-correction): 1. Cherche aide ménagère temps partiel - "Cherche" is natural. "Aide ménagère" is direct. "Temps partiel" is accurate. 5 words. No adjectives. Good start. 2. Recherche personne discrète entretien logement - "Recherche" is fine. "Personne discrète" captures a key aspect. "Entretien logement" is good. 5 words. "Discrète" is an adjective, but it's part of a key job requirement, almost like a noun phrase "profil discret". The constraint says "sans adjectifs", which might mean no *descriptive* adjectives like "super", "efficace", but "discrète" describes a core quality required. Let's keep it in mind as a possibility, but prioritize fully non-adjective options if strong enough. 3. Besoin d'aide entretien ménager régulier - "Besoin d'aide" is natural. "Entretien ménager" is good. "Régulier" is an adjective. Constraint: "sans adjectifs". So, this is out. 4. Aide à domicile discrète temps partiel - "Aide à domicile" is a common term. "Discrète" (adjective). "Temps partiel". 5 words. Same adjective issue. 5. Ménage et entretien régulier à domicile - "Régulier" (adjective). Out. 6. Particulier cherche aide ménagère temps partiel - "Particulier cherche" clearly states who is posting. "Aide ménagère temps partiel". 6 words. No adjectives. This is strong. It emphasizes the "private individual" aspect. 7. Aide ménagère temps partiel pour notre famille - "Pour notre famille" is implied and a bit wordy. The description says "nos emplois du temps de parents", so "famille" is not explicit. Let's keep it more general. 8. Entretien ménager à temps partiel - Simple, direct. "Entretien ménager" covers all tasks. "À temps partiel" covers the type. 5 words. No adjectives. This is very good. It's concise and covers the core. 9. Ménage et repassage à temps partiel - Too specific on tasks, description includes more. 10. Cherchons aide ménagère discrète - "Cherchons" is good. "Aide ménagère" is key. "Discrète" (adjective). Let's re-evaluate the "sans adjectifs" constraint. Often, this means avoiding "qualifying" adjectives like "excellente", "dynamique", "sérieuse". An adjective like "discrète" or "régulier" could be seen as describing the *type* of job or person rather than a subjective quality. However, to be safe, I should aim for options strictly without adjectives if possible. Back to the strongest contenders without explicit adjectives: A) **Cherche aide ménagère temps partiel** (5 words) - Natural, direct, covers core job and type. B) **Particulier cherche aide ménagère temps partiel** (6 words) - Adds the "private individual" context, which is mentioned in the prompt. Still natural. C) **Entretien ménager à temps partiel** (5 words) - Very concise, formal yet direct. "Entretien ménager" covers all tasks. D) **Aide domicile temps partiel discret(e)** - "Discret(e)" is an adjective. Let's consider the nuance "Naturel et direct, comme écrit par un particulier". "Cherche aide ménagère temps partiel" sounds very natural coming from a particular. "Particulier cherche aide ménagère temps partiel" also sounds natural, making it clear it's not a company. "Entretien ménager à temps partiel" is a bit more formal, like an ad title, but still acceptable. The description highlights "respect de notre intimité" and "s'intégrer discrètement". Discretion is a very strong theme. If I can incorporate "discrétion" without an adjective or in a way that aligns with the constraint, that would be ideal. Could I phrase it like: "Aide ménagère : recherche discrétion" ? - "Recherche discrétion" uses "discrétion" (noun) which is fine. - But it's maybe too short and doesn't explicitly state "temps partiel". What about "Aide ménagère temps partiel" ? (4 words) - Very concise. Covers job and type. No adjectives. Natural. - Does it capture enough of the tone? Yes, it's direct. - Does it align with content? Yes, the core is hiring a part-time cleaner. Let's think if any other key aspect can be included naturally within 8 words and without adjectives. "Confiance" is mentioned, but "personne de confiance" would be an adjective phrase, or "confiance requise" is a bit too formal for a title. "Discret" is the most unique and important aspect mentioned, but it's an adjective. Let's re-read "Titre simple, sans adjectifs". This constraint is quite strict. This means "discrète" is out. "Régulier" is out. So, the focus must be on the core service and job type: - Cleaner / Aide ménagère / Entretien ménager - Part-time / Temps partiel Let's re-evaluate: 1. **Cherche aide ménagère temps partiel** (5 words) - Natural, direct. Covers main points. 2. **Particulier cherche aide ménagère temps partiel** (6 words) - Adds context, but "cherche aide ménagère temps partiel" implies it's a particular. Is "Particulier" redundant in a title trying to be short? Perhaps. 3. **Entretien ménager à temps partiel** (5 words) - Good, covers the scope of work (ménage, repassage, rangement, etc.). "Entretien ménager" is a common term for all these tasks. 4. **Besoin d'aide ménagère temps partiel** (5 words) - "Besoin d'aide" is very natural for a particular. Comparing 1, 3, 4: - "Cherche aide ménagère temps partiel": Very good, personal and direct. - "Entretien ménager à temps partiel": Slightly more formal, like a service description. - "Besoin d'aide ménagère temps partiel": Also very good, conveys the need clearly. The description says "Nous recherchons", so "Cherche" or "Besoin" fit well. "Cherche" (or cherchons) aligns with "recherchons". "Besoin d'aide" aligns with the sentiment of "emplois du temps de parents bien remplis". Let's test "Cherche aide ménagère temps partiel" - Max 8 words: 5 words (ok) - Cohérent avec description (ton et contenu): Yes, direct, from a particular, core job. (ok) - Naturel et direct, comme écrit par un particulier: Yes. (ok) - Pas de guillemets, pas de ponctuation finale: Yes. (ok) - Évite de répéter...: Yes. (ok) - Titre simple, sans adjectifs: Yes. (ok) Let's test "Besoin d'aide ménagère temps partiel" - Max 8 words: 5 words (ok) - Cohérent avec description (ton et contenu): Yes, direct, from a particular, core job. (ok) - Naturel et direct, comme écrit par un particulier: Yes, "Besoin d'aide" is very common. (ok) - Pas de guillemets, pas de ponctuation finale: Yes. (ok) - Évite de répéter...: Yes. (ok) - Titre simple, sans adjectifs: Yes. (ok) Both are strong. "Cherche" is slightly more active and direct as a job posting. "Besoin d'aide" expresses the underlying reason. Given the "recherchons une personne", "Cherche" is a very direct translation of that intent into a title. Consider the "catchy" aspect. Catchy often means succinct and impactful. "Aide ménagère temps partiel" (4 words) is even more succinct. Is it catchy? Yes, it's very clear. Let's check this one too. - Max 8 words: 4 words (ok) - Cohérent avec description (ton et contenu): Yes. (ok) - Naturel et direct, comme écrit par un particulier: Yes, it's a very common ad title. (ok) - Pas de guillemets, pas de ponctuation finale: Yes. (ok) - Évite de répéter...: Yes. (ok) - Titre simple, sans adjectifs: Yes. (ok) This is perhaps the strongest because of its brevity and clarity, while still being natural for a private individual. It covers the what and the how (part-time). The description does not explicitly use "aide ménagère", it uses "personne de confiance pour l'entretien régulier". But "aide ménagère" is the standard term that encompasses all mentioned tasks (ménage, repassage, rangement, etc.). "Entretien ménager" is also good. Let's try "Entretien ménager temps partiel" (4 words). - Max 8 words: 4 words (ok) - Cohérent avec description (ton et contenu): Yes. (ok) - Naturel et direct, comme écrit par un particulier: Yes. (ok) - Pas de guillemets, pas de ponctuation finale: Yes. (ok) - Évite de répéter...: Yes. (ok) - Titre simple, sans adjectifs: Yes. (ok) This is also very strong. "Entretien ménager" might even be slightly better than "aide ménagère" as it's closer to "entretien régulier de notre logement" from the description, implying a broader scope than just "ménage". Both "aide ménagère" and "entretien ménager" are standard and common. Let's choose between "Aide ménagère temps partiel" and "Entretien ménager temps partiel". "Entretien ménager" sounds a bit more encompassing, reflecting "ménage, dépoussiérage, sols, salle de bain, cuisine, lessive, repassage simple et le rangement". It covers all these "maintenance" tasks well. "Aide ménagère" is also very common. Which one is "more natural and direct, as written by a private individual"? Both are. The description uses "entretien régulier de notre logement". So "Entretien ménager" has a slight edge in directly echoing the description's phrasing for the job content. It's very simple, direct, short, no adjectives. Final check. Title: Entretien ménager temps partiel Words: 4 Description consistency: Covers "entretien régulier" and "temps partiel". Tone: Direct and natural, exactly what a private individual would write. Constraints: All met. This seems like the best fit.Entretien ménager temps partiel

Hugo D.
il y a 32 jours

Description du poste

Avec nos emplois du temps de parents bien remplis, nous recherchons une personne de confiance pour l'entretien régulier de notre logement, sur un poste à temps partiel. Les tâches incluront le ménage, le dépoussiérage, les sols, la salle de bain, la cuisine, ainsi que la lessive, le repassage simple et le rangement, le tout dans le respect de notre intimité. Nous proposons une rémunération de 14,5€ de l'heure pour un travail consciencieux. Nous espérons trouver quelqu'un qui saura s'intégrer discrètement à notre quotidien.

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samedi 6 décembre 2025
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Lieu
75004, Paris, 4e
Type
Temps partiel
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il y a 32 jours

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